Talk:The Book of Dio/Chapter 1
Fictional and Biased
Surely you're joking. I was under the impression that this was all hard facts.... --Emerick 19:15, 10 July 2008 (BST)
I have made minor changes to this Chapter of the Book of Dio so that it reads better.
I have shown the days more clearly, included the text "on the fifth day" as it was left out, and just generally made it more clear.
If anybody has any issues with the changes I have made please don't hesitate to contact me and tell me.